Writing Craft Article by Karen S.
Wiesner
Based on
Writing Blurbs that Sizzle--And Sell! by Karen S.
Wiesner
Blurbs Series, Part 2:
Series Blurbs
This is the second of six
posts focusing on writing effective blurbs for your books.
In Part
1, we talked about writing high-concept and back cover blurbs. Let's continue.
Part 3: Series Blurbs
At its
crux, a series blurb strives to be a
concise, breathtaking summary of your entire series that includes the major internal and external conflicts and the
goals and motivations of the main character(s), perhaps as a group or some
other concept (the driving force of the story). A series blurb will be a
generalized sentence or paragraph that accurately covers, reflects and
describes every single book in the series. A series blurb can make or break the
sale of an entire set of books. Many publishers and certainly readers buy the
first book in the series and every
single one after it based on a sizzling series blurb that convinces
them they absolutely have to read not only the first book but all of them in
that set!
Let's
first establish that the point of a series is that readers who follow it from
one book to the next will get a richer, more complex, and emotional
experience than those who only read a single book in the series. Those readers
will understand the subtle nuances that one-time browsers won’t pick up on. For
that reason, the author has to make enough vital connections from one book to
the next in their series or readers will lose the purpose in reading that
series at all. Therefore, the first step to writing a series blurb is to figure
out what ties the books together.
Types of Series Ties
If each
book in a series doesn’t somehow tie together or have a touchstone that helps
the reader figure out how they’re connected, you could hardly call these books
a series. There are three distinct types of series ties, but always keep in
mind that authors frequently combine one or more of these in a single series.
·
Recurring Character or Central Group of
Characters
·
Premise/Plot Series
·
Setting Series
The
series ties will also help us figure out what the "who" aspect is of
our series when filling out the next section of the Blurb Worksheet.
Finding the Focus of a Series: Story and
Series Arcs
A story arc is introduced, developed, and
concluded in each individual book of a series. In a series story, a story arc
is short-term because it will be neatly tied-up in a single book within the
series.
A series arc is the long-term thread
that's introduced in the first book in the series, is developed in some way in
every single subsequent book, but is only fully resolved in the final book in
the series.
The
series arc is usually separate from the individual story arcs, but both are
crucial and must fit together seamlessly. As an example, in Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets,
the story arc is the chamber of secrets plotline. The overall series arc, in the
most simplified terms, is good (Harry) overcomes evil (Voldemort)—and that’s
true for every book in that series. The series arc runs beneath the individual
story arcs in each book.
Certain
types of series don’t really need series arcs because they’re open-ended. No
clear end is in sight, and therefore there is less need for a tightly
delineated series arc that must resolve in the final book. In an open-ended
series (such as some sleuth mysteries with a single recurring character—i.e.,
Hercule Poirot and the like), each book in the series is a standalone.
The
series blurb should tell readers how all the books in that series are
connected. If the series blurb is done well enough, those sentences will
accurately reflect what every book in the series is about in a concise,
intriguing summary. If
readers don't understand the premise of your series in the blurb, they may not
bother try reading the first book.
Now that
we know what a series blurb needs to include, we can use a short form to
provide the jumping-off point in crafting one of our own on the Blurb
Worksheet:
Basic Series Information: Fill out
as completely as possible, keeping in mind that you may not use all, much or
any of this in your final blurb.
Series Title:
Genre(s):
[Who] Series Tie(s):
Recurring or Cast of Characters Series
Premise/Plot
Series
Setting
Series
Basic Series Arcs:
[What] Conflict or crisis that
sets the series in motion:
[Why] What's the worst case
resolution scenario to the crisis situation?
We're
going to use a modified variation of our "formula" for the series
blurb:
Who
(Series Tie)
What
(Conflict
or Crisis)
Why
(Worst
Case Resolution Scenario)
Note
that resolutions are not usually needed in the series blurb, since you don’t
want to defuse the intrigue or tension, but sometimes a resolution will work
well in the overall series blurb. Play with it to see all the alternatives.
Let's
fill out the form and formula, this time with The Expanse Series. The books
don't technically have a series blurb--not a definitive one anyway--the way the
TV series does, but I've put together a slightly hybridized version below.
Series Title: The Expanse
Genre(s): Science Fiction
[Who] Series Tie(s): Premise/Plot Series (though it could fit in
other categories as well), in this case a futuristic galaxy that humans have
developed and colonized. I.e.: Hundreds of years in the future, humans have
colonized the solar system.
Series Arcs:
[What] Conflict or Crisis that
Sets the Series in Motion: The U.N. controls Earth. Mars is an independent
military power. The planets rely on the resources of the Asteroid Belt, where
air and water are more precious than gold. For decades, tensions have been
rising between these three places.
[Why] What's the worst case
resolution scenario to the crisis situation? A police detective in the asteroid
belt, the first officer of an interplanetary ice freighter and an earth-bound
United Nations executive slowly discover a vast conspiracy that threatens the
Earth's rebellious colony on the asteroid belt. Earth, Mars and the Belt are
now on the brink of war. And all it will take is a single spark.
We're
going to use a slightly modified variation of our blurb "formula":
Who (Hundreds
of years in the future, humans have colonized the solar system. The U.N.
controls Earth. Mars is an independent military power. The planets rely on the
resources of the Asteroid Belt, where air and water are more precious than
gold. For decades, tensions have been rising between these three places.) Series Tie
What (A
police detective in the asteroid belt, the first officer of an interplanetary
ice freighter and an earth-bound United Nations executive slowly discover a
vast conspiracy that threatens the Earth's rebellious colony on the asteroid
belt.) Conflict or Crisis
Why (Earth,
Mars and the Belt are now on the brink of war. And all it will take is a single
spark.) Worst Case Resolution
Scenario
Here's the blurb for The Expanse Series:
Hundreds of years in the future, humans
have colonized the solar system. The U.N. controls Earth. Mars is an
independent military power. The planets rely on the resources of the Asteroid
Belt, where air and water are more precious than gold. For decades, tensions have
been rising between these three places. A police detective in the asteroid
belt, the first officer of an interplanetary ice freighter and an earth-bound
United Nations executive slowly discover a vast conspiracy that threatens the
Earth's rebellious colony on the asteroid belt. Earth, Mars and the Belt are
now on the brink of war. And all it will take is a single spark.
Remember the axiom we fixed in our minds
earlier: If the blurb isn't effectively good, making you want to read the story
inside the pages, it won't work. The goal is to get readers to read the book. Apparently, Tolstoy downed a gallon or
two of vodka while trying to write the blurb for War and Peace. Truly, here is no better way to test an author's
ability to write concisely in a way that engages and entices the reader into
wanting more than with these three different types of blurb. Time to get down
to that Blurb Hokey Pokey.
In Part 3, we'll talk about some basics
of crafting blurbs.
Karen S.
Wiesner is the author of Writing Blurbs That Sizzle--And Sell!
Volume 7 of the 3D Fiction Fundamentals
Collection
http://www.writers-exchange.com/3d-fiction-fundamentals-series/
https://karenwiesner.weebly.com/writing-reference-titles.html
Happy writing!
Karen Wiesner
is an award-winning, multi-genre author of over 150 titles and 16 series. Visit
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